I'm not hung up on the jobs at all, I actually think its a weak reason to support that opinion, so bring your complaint up to the author. I just don't think the opinion holds water and the "hows" seems to run counter to your previous claims. The opinion supports an even farther right approach to Hamas.
Did Israel make some mistakes in dealing with Hamas? I don't doubt they have, but it doesn't change what Hamas unilaterally did on October 7, 2023. That attack was funded and assisted by Iran, not Israel. The common denominator again is "radical islam".